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When the soul suffers from a want,

Inflict upon the body of like kind,

Let hunger be the thing to taunt,

You into steeling your mind,

Mayhap then the want you'll find.

Talking to myself really, don't take as advice.
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Aj-DandD-DM Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great writing :) I love the flow of it :) 
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refield Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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Aj-DandD-DM Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are very welcome friend :) 
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refield Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad to know your thoughts on my work, and I look forward to hearing more of them in the future.
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Aj-DandD-DM Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are very welcome :)  I will definitely let you know more for future ones :) 
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dcrisisbeta Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017   Traditional Artist
=w=; this sounds to me like impulse and self control....
I'm bad at both ... like... really, really bad XD
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refield Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
That is the most difficult part of fasting.
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StaceyJulAlexandria Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Nice
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refield Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
If you say so.
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