literature

Mr. Carl

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I'm tired,

Haggard,

Dogged,

Blistered,

But my son needs me.

 

It hurts,

Grieving,

Striving,

Surviving,

But my son needs me.

 

He hurts,

Lonesome,

Angry,

Jealous,

But still longs to love.

 

Her sister,

Angry,

Demanding,

Strict,

She has a son too.

 

He's frightened,

Reclusive,

Clinging,

Cleaving,

But it's not me he fears.

 

I notice,

Observe,

Analyze,

Conclude,

My nephew is unwell.

 

Too thin,

Hungry,

Skinny,

Emaciated,

Though he tries to hide in baggy clothes.

 

Bill saw,

Spotted,

Recognized,

Witnessed,

What happened when he disobeyed.

 

I'm tired,

Haggard,

Dogged,

Blistered,

But my nephew needs me.

 

That's enough,

Final,

Finished,

Ended,

I will allow not one more second.

 

He's safe,

Secure,

Protected,

Guarded,

As my son and Bill's brother.

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Very impressive and emotional!  (just now found it)
I have a couple of stories to write, and this actually gives a few background details I can use.